Walking through a life storm
unable to see
figures move around me
what can they be
The cold is biting
an issue gnaws at my soul
is there a solution
will there be a goal
Fighting harder
the wind beats against my skin
it grows darker
will this nightmare end
The trees form a shape
it is more frightening than before
will I be enveloped
is there a door
Suddenly a door appears
sanctuary for this day
trudging through the snow to reach it
something in the way
Reaching the knob
hobbling inside
a solution to an issue
I have survived
copyright 2018 Debbie Pierce
https://pipersadventures.blog/2018/06/06/nightmare-a-storm-within-my-soul
Great poem! I can totally relate to those issues….”gnawing at my soul”. Hope you have a gentle day today!!!!! 💙
Thank you. Hope that you have a wonderful day as well.
Poignant👌
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Same to u
‘the trees form a shape it is more frightening than before…’ The creepy shadows are actually more frightening the dark. Beautiful portrayal of fear!!
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Nice job! You relate your feelings very well.
Thank you.