Enjoying my lunch
listening to the water flow
contemplating the spiritual realm
taking thoughts slow
Trusting my intuition
that life is not a dream
flowing like the water
implying time is a stream
Moving in a rhythm
beginning with trickling rain
slow and steady
bubbling like champagne
Drifting in a calm moment
suddenly going over a hill
life falls into the rapids
oh what a thrill
Swishing along
left and then to the right
anticipating what comes next
enough to excite
Out of the rapids
life gives us a break
an afternoon slumber
till a stone jolts us awake
Life’s rhythm
continues to circle
providing crevices and rapids to explore
another glimpse into the eternal
Meditation over
enjoying the sweet smell of a rain mist
a rainbow shines in the sun
rain drops sparkle on my face with bliss
copyright 2023 Debbie Pierce
Piper's Adventures 
really nice Debbie! ❤
Thank you. Have a wonderful day!
Your water analogy allows for …
a) Gravity controls water.
b) Water follows the path of least resistance.
c) Water never apologizes.
d) Rain allows water to come full circle.
Hence: Perfection!
Thank you. I love using water analogies. So much fun. Have a wonderful day!
Trust intuition, mind gets in the way.
That is so true. There are many times that the mind does get in the way. Thanks for reading. Have a wonderful day!
I enjoy reading contributions in RDP. Thanks for writing.