Eternity is a spectacular place
filled with constant renewal
sitting at my desk
realizing sometimes it can be cruel
The story began
so long ago
believing I could finish it
refusing to let go
Physical life ended
but my soul refused to leave
so very important
or so I believed
It seemed the universe concurred
as the light never went out
skin rotting with each stroke
going to finish without a doubt
Only the shadow of me remains
my bones attached the paper
words are flowing
finishing now instead of later
On a bus
arriving in Heaven
allowed to see my story
on the news at eleven
Walking into the gates
eyes filled with expression
explaining that the story
is my confession
After hearing laughter
there was an examination
a sigh of relief
that I have been granted dispensation
New life
another story begins
excitement and adventure
knowing the story never ends
copyright 2022 Debbie Pierce
Piper's Adventures 
The never ending story.
I agree. Thanks for reading. Thanks for posting the fun picture. It was great for inspiring the story. Have a wonderful day!
I can’t believe there are no comments Debbie.
This is so good…..
Although many would not hold my view that I believe in reincarnation of the soul. You can’t tell me that 90 years here has all been a waste of time.
Ends in nothingness. It just defies logic. To me. How my soul will be recycled I’ve no idea.
You’re not good enough yet Don, only 70%. 95% needed to enter the Gates. Here’s a new baby for you to try out again in. Thankyou God. I will try and improve. To me this is a plausible reincarnation path. To me logical. Others fanciful?
But Don there are more babies being born than people dying. What happens now? God’s got a problem
I’ve made several suggestions
Keep a reserve bank of souls . Bit like a creche tended by the angels
Reincarnate some as animals. Nice souls to cats, bad ones to ??
Seriously, I know many don’t believe in reincarnation, but for me to spend 80 years here and end in a black hole does not make sense. It defies logic. To me.
I’ve told God which baby I want to come back as – my daughters. She’s a good kid. I wonder why?
Cheers
I’m surprised you haven’t got comments on this Debbie. I t is so good…..
Thank you.
Thank you. Reincarnation is a fun subject and there is some proof out there that it exists. I believe that we continue on and that this life is only part of our journey. So many possibilities exist that I don’t know where my next adventure will be after this life. I believe that it will another adventure filled with love and joy. Thanks for reading. Have a wonderful day!