There is power in the ascent
a treat for the senses
rising high in the air
heightened awareness commences
There are water vapors
a chance to ascend into the clouds
journey into the heavens
all adventures are allowed
Pure warm water
spurting where the eyes can see
powerful expressions of emotion
total expression of what is alive in me
Living in the moment
as the expression begins to descend
feeling the joy and happiness
till the very end
Back in the ground
the cycle begins again
wrapping all the elements around me
surrounded by family and friends
copyright 2018 Debbie Pierce
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Nothing can compare with the emotion you put in your poems. I seriously mean that.
Thank you. Have a wonderful day!
Oh wow, a moment of synchronicity here! Seems like we crossed wavelengths. 🙂
Thank you. Thanks for sharing. Have a wonderful day!
Like hidden feelings spewing forth
Nature has a way of expressing feelings. Thanks for sharing. Thanks for reading.
Enjoy reading your poems so much – great job!
Thank you.
Beautiful! Speechless! I believe the poet who is able to expand his emotions to his readers is a true poet. This is what I find in your compositions. I’m very serious with my words. It’s probably the most peaceful and tranquil place I’ve visited on WordPress. Keep going!
Thank you for your kind words. Thanks for reading.
beautiful piece debbie. x
Thank you. Thanks for reading.