Cast in the morning dew
knitted to perfection
in an intricate design
making a spiritual connection
Dropping to a crevice
waiting for prey
the spider blends so well
on this sunny day
seems so sad to break
blocking the path
location a mistake
Splitting the web
taking away the spider’s meal
silks flowing in the wind
a bad deal
The spider unfazed
begins spinning again
this time away from the path
with wiser zen
copyright 2023 Debbie Pierce
Thanks for joining in Debbie. Lovely poem.
Thank you. The prompts were fun. Have a wonderful day!
I like the color of your voice reciting a poem. This is wonderful.
Thank you. I am trying some new things in my poems. Thanks for reading. Have a wonderful day!
That’s always a good thing. Keep playing with it. It really looks and feels great, and that voiceover that helps people with bad vision or dyslexia does seem helpful. I mean, it broadens your audience and reaches more people who enjoy poems.
Thank you. I will keep playing with it. I am happy that the voiceover helps people. I have been a little concerned that my southern accent may be hard to understand. My voice seems to have a drawl to it. Thank you for your kind words. Please take care. Have a wonderful day!
Southern has its charm, so don’t worry about it.
this was awesome Debbie! 🙂
Thank you. I enjoy the artistry in spider webs. Thanks for reading. Have a wonderful day!
Thanks for sharing your wonderful poem.Anita
Thank you for reading. Have a wonderful day!
Beautifully written. Good that the wiser spider picked a better spot.
Thank you. I enjoy the artistry in spider webs. So intriguing. Thanks for reading. Have a wonderful day!
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