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The Cave’s Eye

Standing outside the cave

admiring the spectacular views

hiraeth for my love

hopeless feeling is not new

Glancing at the sun

mocking my soul

darkness seems welcoming

deep sadness that is old

Hearing a noise

just outside the cave

it sounds like joy

pulling me from the grave

Sun creates a vision

my love standing there

filled with love and beauty

an answer to a prayer

This is a time to live

not to die

I am always with you

beyond the corner of your eye

Our souls are joined

there is more living to do

love and laughter

physical days separated are few

Live life

each moment is an adventure

see me in everything

during your earthly tenure

The vision ended

tears in my eyes

feeling love and comfort

true love never dies

Walking away

enjoying the cool breeze

love fills my heart

grief is eased

copyright 2021 Debbie Pierce

https://ragtagcommunity.wordpress.com/2021/08/14/ragtag-daily-prompt-saturday-hiraeth/

https://fivedotoh.com/2021/08/14/fowc-with-fandango-hopeless/

https://wordofthedaychallenge.wordpress.com/2021/08/14/spectacular/

By pipersadventures9

Piper Pierce is a Mississippi native who loves to experience the journey through life.

10 replies on “The Cave’s Eye”

Debbie this is wonderful. Just perfect. My favourite lines –
“Glancing at the sun
mocking my soul
darkness seems welcoming
deep sadness that is old”
Thanks for joining in ❤

Thank you. These years of grief have been a journey. The word prompts were fun and seemed appropriate to express some of those feelings. Thanks for reading. Have a wonderful day!

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