Hanging onto the beam
trying not to look at the ground
he had taken the bait
thought his fate was bound
Dangling feet
the sky showing history
of a savory life
some actions a mystery
He had taken to mollynogging
then placed bets at the race
promises of immense pleasure
nothing could replace
Hands slipping now
he saw what could have been
a wife and family
love that would never bend
One hand falls
the earth opens with fire
so deep is the pit
his situation is dire
It seemed so innocent
there would never be any pain
how little did he know
his soul would not gain
His other hand slips
falling into the flaming pit
screaming as he goes down
fearing for his spirit
Waking up in his bed
body filled with sweat
was it real or a warning
a destiny not yet met
Time to make a choice
about the life he leads
will the path continue
or will that destiny take heed
copyright 2021 Debbie Pierce
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Wow! A beam becomes the proverbial image of life. His choices determining if he’ll fall or not. Then its a dream. What a fantastic poem!!
Thank you. I decided that it would be exciting to put it in a dream. It was fun to write. Have a wonderful day!
I can tell you enjoyed it from reading. I was amazing.
Thank you.
Great drama and ending!
Thank you. Thanks for reading.
So good, debbie! I loved it! ❤ ❤
Thank you. It was a fun one to write.