White bicycle with fire
flying through the air
speeding through the cosmos
living life with a flare
Living life in the fast lane
with a need for speed
committing adventurous acts
fulfilling a need
Life is like this bike
some feel a need to speed
acting before thinking
without wise counsel to heed
Speaking before thinking
can cause some to fear
fire comes from the voice
causing some tears
Listen before we speak
communicate with love
creating a better world
like the cosmos above
copyright 2017 Debbie Pierce
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But aren’t the cosmos always grumbling, and acting violently.. Just kidding nice post…I love those who use minimalistic expressions..
Thank you for your kind words. Thanks for reading.
Beautifully written 🙂 I love the “Speaking before thinking
can cause some to fear
fire comes from the voice
causing some tears” portion. This holds true for many people. it’s interesting how different forms of communication are effective in different contexts. Listening is essential though.
Thank you for your kind words. I agree. Thanks for reading.