Wobbling across the land
becoming one with the night
with a lantern to guide me
the light is quite bright
Floating across the cosmos
appears to be an excess of debris
decrypting messages from the stars
epic stories meant for me
The river rages near me
as if inviting a fight
animals screech in the darkness
sounds of fright
Walking on
becoming one with wind
sending light into the darkness
spirit counts it as a win
Now on the ground
looking for a place to sleep
counting the stars in heaven
life is sweet
copyright 2023 Debbie Pierce
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very beautiful poem Debbie! ❤ 🙂
Thank you. Thanks for reading. Have a wonderful day!
Thanks for sharing your wonderful poem .Anita
My pleasure. Thanks for reading. Have a wonderful day!
LIked this, except for the “wobbling” bit at the beginning. Makes you sound decrepit. Perhaps “embracing” or a similar thought would better portray the spirit of your night’s experience. All in all, your “journey” as expressed in your poetry is an inspiring one.
Thank you. I agree that embracing would have been a better description of the night’s experience. Thanks for reading. Have a wonderful day!
Life is sweet! A beautiful poem to celebrate life and being alive. Thanks Piper for joining in.
Thank you. My pleasure. Have a wonderful day!
You too. 💕