There is a puncture in the canyon
a hole for all to see
showing parts of the sky
beauty for you and me
The canyon is like our hearts
with holes from life’s struggles
times can be difficult
when we juggle
God heals us
when we lean on Him
comfort and healing
comes from within
The puncture closes up
when we love one another
communities helping
to heal each other
copyright 2017 Debbie Pierce
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Wow! This is beautiful. I love the whole four ‘stanzas’ of the poem. Each carries a distinct message. 🙂
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You’re welcome! You write good poetry. 🙂
Love this one! Beautiful!
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Love your poem! It’s so encouraging! Thanks for sharing!
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Heart touching. Keep writng
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Superb, inspiring poem
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Before I even read the poem, your picture took me to a day I had stood exactly where you are, only I didn’t have words. The Grand Canyon is such a spiritual place. Thank you for placing powerful words in this omnipotent place. And I love how you brought symbolism to the canyon.
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