Out of the cornea of my eye
the photons scattered
the velocity of the bomb
took away all that mattered
Blown across the hall
the historic moment came
ghostly figures appeared
none had a name
I had expected a tunnel
going from darkness to light
filled with beauty
but now there was only fright
Looking closer
these beings held emotions
sadness, anger, and shock
so much commotion
Time passed
as each ghost accepted his fate
composure returned
at the appearance of a gate
The ghosts filtered through
some screaming with delight
a spectacular world
filled with love and light
Others confused
choosing to run away
searching the debris
looking for another way
Making a choice
I walked through the gate
loved ones surrounding me
in a world without hate
The gate disappeared
saying a prayer for those who were lost
wanting to return to a world
where hate has a high cost
copyright 2023 Debbie Pierce
Piper's Adventures 
This certainly takes one’s breath away.
Thank you. It was a fun flash fiction picture for writing. Thanks for reading. Have a wonderful day!
Excellent take on the photo.
Thank you. It was a fun photo. Thanks for posting it. Have a wonderful day!
Fantastic take on the photo 🙌
Thank you. It was a fun photo prompt. Thanks for reading. Have a wonderful day!
Y y ou are welcome have a good one too ♥️
Very creative work Piper. I love the way you seamlessly wove the prompt words in while interpreting Fandango’s image at the same time.
Thank you. I enjoyed using your word prompts for Fandango’s image. It was so much fun to write. Thank you for the word prompts and for reading. Have a wonderful day!
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